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Written by KC

15 July 2010 | 120215 words | Work in Progress

Title: War of the Wizards
Author: KC
Rating: PG
Pairing(s): Faramir
Warnings: Spanking
Disclaimer: The characters are not mine. They belong to Tolkien.<br>,Please let me know what you think of this story by leaving a comment.

This is number seven in the series that started with Grief, Elf, Wasps and an Angry Wizard and Stubborn Stewards and Bright Red Paddles, Human King, Elven King & One Stubborn Steward, Sweet Revenge or Let Licking Dogs Lie and Elves, Orcs and the Road to Recovery.
Added: Chapter 52


Part 52

With a wave of his hand in farewell, Finrod and the two Ithilien rangers handpicked by Faramir peeled off from the rest of the combined forces and rode ahead on their mission to rendezvous with Radagast the Brown near Minas Morgul.

Aragorn recognised the warning signs that his brothers were just about ready to bolt after Finrod and the rangers; however, one very quiet “at your peril, elflings” from Maglor was enough to stop them dead in their tracks. Glaring at the Mirkwood elf the twins decided to sulk instead, much to the amusement of their brother, friend and dwarf.

In line with the strategy agreed by the military leaders, the combined army of the West divided into three contingents. Two small contingents, consisting entirely of mounted Ithilien rangers and a mixture of the few Mirkwood and Rivendell elves that had stayed in the White City to assist in the rebuilding efforts, broke away from the main force. One contingent rode to the North and the other to the South. Their objective was to cross the Anduin at points not observable by the enemy, make their way to the top of the cliffs that flanked both sides of the pass that led to Minas Morgul and secure that high ground; sweeping away any enemies located without, hopefully, alerting the enemy at Minas Morgul.

Faramir, with Amrothos riding by his left side, watched his rangers as they disappeared into the distance; wanting desperately to be with them for he knew the danger they faced in the days and weeks ahead. In addition, the Sionnarch of Ithilien was not yet used to the restrictions placed upon him by his office as the Steward of Gondor. He wondered briefly if he ever would be. The Steward knew that if he had a snowball’s chance in the fires of Mordor of escaping his collective nannies, he would have followed his men in a trice.

“Do not fear, Fara,” consoled Amrothos, feeling for his cousin’s longing to go with his men. “Of all our forces, they are the most skilled in the arts of concealment and fighting with stealth and have the added advantage of the support and abilities of the Elves. And I can say with the utmost confidence that neither of us has any chance of escaping the watchful eyes of the King or the Elves”, he added wistfully.

Faramir looked askance at his cousin and chuckled.

“Annoying, is it not?”

“Exceedingly,” Amrothos replied wryly.

Although Minas Tirith was only a relatively short distance, ‘as the crow flies’, from Minas Morgul; being barely twenty leagues away, it would take the combined army, which included both foot and mounted troops, close to four weeks to arrive at its destination as the route devised by the King and his commanders to take the army to Minas Morgul was more circuitous one in an effort to hide numbers and intent from the enemy for as long as possible. Instead of progressing in a straight line to Minas Morgul, the combined forces would turn South, angling towards the Anduin to cross the river near Emyn Arnen using the hills of the region to hide their movements. The army would then make for the Harrad Road and, turning North, follow the road to Minas Morgul. This would enable to the two small contingents of rangers and elves enough time, hopefully, to clear the cliffs on either side of the pass of Minas Morgul of all enemy forces that could raise the alarm, and set their own positions to offer cover to the combined forces from above.

A halt was made at the end of the first days march on a very large clearing near a small stream, allowing enough daylight remaining to set up camp, as setting up camp in the dark was much harder. A lone, tall and very old chestnut tree sat in the middle of the clearing. Support personnel, with the aid of many of the soldiers, started to set up camp and erect small four man tents. As the troops, generally, had had much previous experience in long marches, the process of setting up the camp went very smoothly.

Amrothos and Faramir dismounted and as all good horsemen do, they saw to the needs of their mounts before handing the reins of their horses over to the young squires waiting. Amrothos screwed up his nose in distaste as he saw Éomer dismount as if he had gone for a short ride and had not been, as had been the case, riding for hours. The young knight of Dol Amrothos knew he himself was more suited to ships and sea than riding a mount. He ached and needed to stretch out the kinks a day’s riding had caused.

Eying the old chestnut tree speculatively and knowing his cousin’s sorrowful mood at being forbidden to ride out with his rangers, the young swan knight threw his cousin a look that put Faramir immediately on alert.

“Last one up helps the cook peel vegetables,” said Amrothos as he shrugged out of his armament and heavy clothing down to his leggings and undershirt, sans boots and socks.

Accepting the challenge with a laugh, Faramir followed suit and both fox cubs bounded first to their mounts, which had been tethered with the other horses by the two young squires, grabbed their respective small standards, that is, flags representing their allegiances to their homes that were tied to their horse’s manes and then bounded off towards the tree at full pelt.

“Whatever are they doing?” Aragorn asked looking decidedly bemused as he stood with the three Mirkwood elves, Gimli and Misto. Unbeknownst to all but Misto, Boromir was watching the fox cubs with a look of utmost fondness.

“Something that I have seen the descendents of Adrahil do from the time they could climb, and in the case young Amrothos there before he had truly mastered the art of walking; much to his sire and grand-sire’s horror at the time when they found the young rapscallion sitting on the very edge of the outer wall of the palace, laughing merrily and clapping his hands in delight at the pretty ships in the harbour below,” Gandalf replied with a hearty laugh as he walked over to the bemused King, with Éomer and the twins close behind. “The one who does not make it to the top of whatever they are climbing first, generally volunteers to do some task that neither enjoys”.

Aragorn watched Amrothos reach the tree first, opting to take the easier route by jumping onto the first branch on the right side of the tree trunk, located about seven feet from the ground. This left Faramir with no option but to launch himself at the first branch on the left side of the tree trunk, which was located about ten feet from the ground. The King released a breath he did not realise that he had been holding as Faramir leaped high into the air, grabbed onto the lowest branch, hauled himself up quickly before launching himself onto the next branch above him.

“I knew Faramir was an excellent climber,” Legolas said, remembering how easily his brother had assisted him in hoisting up the trouble-making elf Amras and securing him to the highest beam in the Mirkwood hall, garnering a look from his sire that indicated his sire knew exactly from which memory his elfling was drawing. “But I now realise that the skill comes from his Dol Amroth connection,” he added quietly, blushing and attempting to ignore his sire’s knowing look.

Legolas noted that all movement had stopped within the camp as all eyes watched the progress of the young men to the top of the tree. Amrothos would have reached the top first, having the advantage of having reached the tree first, if he had not been snagged momentarily on a small branch thus allowing Faramir to pass him and reach the top branch first and then tying his standard, being that of Gondor, to the top of the tree.

“The tree cheated!” Amrothos cried foul but with mirth clearly writ in his features as he surveyed the countryside from his vantage point, feeling his muscles and vertebra stretched nicely.

Faramir’s gaze went distant for a moment as it was wont to do when he was listening to sounds that others could not hear.

“The tree says nay cousin,” he laughed, delighting in the feeling of merriment from the tree which had not felt the feet of elves in a very long time. “Men,” Faramir corrected automatically much to the tree’s confusion as it had never seen such behaviour before from the race of men.

The two men descended the tree at a speed that had Maglor and Thranduil frowning and Aragorn unknowingly holding his breath again. Even Éomer looked concerned, although no one else noticed as all attention centred on the fox cubs. Both men jumped lightly to the ground from the lowest limb and then bowed, and in the case of Faramir; shyly and with a mighty blush, to the cheering and laughing crowd that had gathered around the bottom of the tree.

“Well, I am off to peel vegetables then,” Amrothos sighed, morosely.

“We will both peel vegetables,” Faramir replied with a chuckle as he put his arm around his cousin’s shoulders and guided the young knight towards the area where food was being prepared, both still sans boots and socks.

“I am pleased that young Amrothos is with us on this march,” Gandalf smiled as he watched the cousins walk away in the opposite direction. “He has ever been a foil to my wizardling’s more sombre moods”.

“If I had not seen proof with my own eyes and with such frequency at that, I would not have believed that either possesses such lightening quick tempers of such magnitude,” the King of Gondor shook his head as he turned and walked slowly back to the recently prepared campfire followed by the others. “When they are not planning some devilment or in the midst of a temper conniption, they both have such open, comely faces of such innocence, you would not think butter would melt in their mouths,” he added in a tone that was half complaint against the innate unfairness of the forces that be in such circumstances, causing the elves and dwarf to chuckle and Boromir to snort. Éomer, as ever when Faramir was mentioned, just frowned and listened intently.

“As was the case with Adrahil,” Thranduil snorted as he sat upon on a ground sheet that had been set down in front of the King’s campire. “And all of them all the more dangerous for it; as the explosions of temper can take one by surprise no matter how many times one has witnessed them before.”

“What was Adrahil like in his youth?” Elladan asked from his seated position next to Gimli on the other side of the campfire.

Thranduil chucked at the memory of his first meeting with the young Knight of Dol Amroth.

“Faramir favours him most in looks, the same colour eyes and hair, mouth, height and build, although nowhere near as thin as my son is at the moment. His nose though, was more like young Amrothos’,” Thranduil replied, with a distant look of remembrance in his eyes as he pictured his friend.

“Where did you meet? Elrohir asked from his position between his twin and Maglor.

“Now that is a story!” Thranduil laughed at the memory. “Angelimar, Adrahil’s father, had had enough of his son’s youthful antics involving wine, women and the murderous husband of one of the women; when Mithrandir suggested that he could use the services of young Adrahil that would remove him from Dol Amroth for several months. Needless to say, Angelimar fair jumped at the opportunity to see his son safely elsewhere”.

Gandalf, who was sitting on a camp seat that had been provided for the elderly Istari, snorted at the memory. If he had been present and not have gone scuttling after his ‘mama’, only Misto would have seen Boromir’s ghostly blush as he remembered his uncle’s comment about how alike his nephew was to his grandsire where wine and women were concerned.

“Mithrandir had sent word to both Elrond and I that he wanted us to chase down some rumours in Harad about the location of the ‘one ring’. He advised that he would not be able to join us on the mission, but that we were to meet with a young human prince by the name of Adrahil at an inn located in a border town between Gondor and Harad. He advised that the young prince had further information that would assist us and asked that we take the young human under our wings, as he was uncommonly intelligent and devious but warned that did have an issue with his temper…”


“This is the inn,” Thranduil said to Elrond as he opened the door to reveal, pandemonium.

Goblets and tankards sailed through the air, as did pieces of furniture and even some bodies as it seemed that every patron within the establishment was bent upon knocking senseless another patron. Both elves stood against the wall, just inside of the front door, in an attempt to make sense of the scene.

At what appeared to be the centre of the maelstrom, the elves could see a young human with clear blue eyes and fox coloured hair attempting to knock out a man who stood at least twelve inches taller and was twice his weight. The young man appeared to be doing quite well though, as he made up in speed and agility what he lacked in height and volume.

“Let me guess,” Thranduil said shaking his head ruefully as he looked at his long time friend. “Prince Adrahil of Dol Amroth?”

“I suppose we should intervene and assist the young fool,” Elrond sighed just as he saw the young man’s attention divert momentarily, as he looked in their direction, and recognition register in his features, which was just long enough for the giant to land and uppercut to the young man’s jaw that sent him flying backwards and crashing into the wall behind. The young man slipped slowly down the wall as his eyes rolled back and he settled in an unconscious heap upon the floor of the inn.

To Be Continued

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51 Comment(s)

I really like what you’ve done with all these stories. I can’t wait to continue reading them. I do have a question. How on earth will Faramir continue to age. Will he get old like gandalf, or just stop like hte elves? Just curious! Keep writing! classacte

— classacte    Thursday 20 April 2006, 5:53    #

when are you going to update this? Poor Chiri, and I can’t wait to see what happens with Sarumon! COntinue soon! classacte

— classacte    Tuesday 2 May 2006, 3:24    #

wow, these stories are great. Can’t wait to read the rest. I’d love to see a flashback of Thranduil and Maglor dealing with the escape of the dwarves since you made it sound so funny. Keep up the good work.

— Daughter of Thranduil    Saturday 10 June 2006, 6:00    #

Hi again. Just curious as to when you will be updating next?

— Daughter of Thranduil    Thursday 13 July 2006, 23:46    #

I LOVE it! Keep up the fantastic work. Just one little question: what does Maglor truely look like? I’ve reread this fiction at least a dozen times & I’m curious to his hair color and style!

— Lori Tankersley    Friday 4 August 2006, 4:14    #

Hi Lori,

Thank you for the kind words and I’m pleased you are enjoying the story. I described Maglor very briefly in Elves, Orcs and the Road to recovery as “a tall blond elven warrior”. I picture him as having long blond hair in the elven way with warrior braids. He is taller than Legolas and Faramir. Of course, like all evles he is stunning with deep blue eyes that seem endlessly deep.

KC    Friday 4 August 2006, 18:10    #

Hee hee! Serves Eomer right for being so nasty to Faramir! I really enjoyed this chapter. Maglor is such a wonderful character. Keep up the great work.

— Daughter of Thranduil    Saturday 5 August 2006, 16:39    #

Thank you!! Maglor has been an absolute hoot to write and I’m pleased it shows through :)

KC    Sunday 6 August 2006, 14:18    #

Great chapter. Loved it.

— Daughter of Thranduil    Wednesday 27 September 2006, 20:52    #

I alsways enjoy your story very much. This chapter was no exception. I think that Eomer got what he deserved and Misto’s reaction/action was what to be expected! ;) Are we starting with the march towards Minas Morgul next? Can’t wait to see how the battle plays out! Patience is not a virtue :)

— maeglina    Monday 2 October 2006, 15:14    #

It’s so good to see a new chapter of this story! Such fun :-)

— Monica    Wednesday 30 May 2007, 9:56    #

Thank you Monica,

It’s been a rough few months but I’m back to writing (whew!). I’ve even started on part 51.

KC    Thursday 31 May 2007, 5:34    #

Welcome back! We missed you!

— Archmage XIII    Saturday 16 June 2007, 7:24    #

Thank you! Good to be writing again. Hope to have the next part finished soon.

KC    Monday 18 June 2007, 12:06    #

Wonderful to see another chapter to this story, I’ve been reading since the beginning on a yahoo group that I lost track of, so I’ very glad you post here. Loved Misto’s armour! Looking forward to the next part.

— wendyuk    Wednesday 1 August 2007, 11:32    #

Thank you Wendy!! It’s certainly been a long journey. I never imagined the story would go in the directions it has LOL. Hope to update Soon. Thanks again :)

KC    Sunday 5 August 2007, 9:10    #

Delighted to see a new chapter of this fun read. It always puts a smile on my face.
BTw – I love your portrayal of Arwen.

— Dixie    Monday 6 August 2007, 0:41    #

Thank you Dixie! Always nice to know that people find something to smile about in my stories. And thank you for the compliment about Arwen!! :)

KC    Monday 13 August 2007, 9:51    #

Since this hasn’t been updated in around 7 months, I gather it’s dead? Shame, as I was enjoying it. I keep checking back periodically to see if there’s an update, but my hopes dwindle.

— Mandy    Saturday 23 February 2008, 22:48    #

Hi Mandy,

Sorry but RL got in the way big time. My country had a welcome change of Government last November. A change of Government, before and after, means a lot of work. The project that I was working was discontinued so apart from looking for a transfer to another organisation, I have more time on my hands now in addition to a new laptop. I have started work on the next chapter and hope to have it finished within the next few weeks.
Cheers
KC

KC    Sunday 24 February 2008, 7:27    #

That comment made me laugh out loud. You must be British. Did no one in England like poor Tony? He seems about as popular as Bush is over here, but I imagine both men meant well. Lord knows what we’ll end up with in Nov. Oh well, I’ll keep checking on the story. Thanks.

— Mandy    Sunday 24 February 2008, 23:57    #

@Mandy:

“You must be British.”

I think not. Blair left us some 5 months earlier, in June, not November, and as he stood down as Prime Minister during the Labour government’s term in office and handed over to Gordon Brown for the rest of that term, it was not a change of government either. Imagine (keeping in mind that prime ministers are not presidents and the two systems are not comparable) that —God forbid— something would happen to Bush: then Cheney would take over until the next elections.

Countries that were in the process of changing their governments around last November include Australia, Denmark, Croatia and Argentina. A glance at KC's email address makes me suspect we're dealing with the first.

PS: If you want to keep up with political affairs around the world (US media are so inwardly focused), the BBC are an invaluable source. Personally I prefer The Economist which has an excellent ‘Politics this week’ section, with matching weekly newsletter.

Admin    Monday 25 February 2008, 8:12    #

Hi Mandy
Admin is right. Blair was extremely popular in comparison to our ex-Prime Minister Howard. We now have a round faced, blond, blue-eyed Labor PM who speaks, of all languages, Mandarin. A breath of fresh air but damn Kevin Rudd’s hard work. He makes workaholics look narcoleptic.

KC    Monday 25 February 2008, 8:53    #

Ouch. And I thought that our lot was bad. Good to hear that this isn’t dead, since I’m rather fond of them. Although, I do find myself feeling sorry for Eomer. Even if he is an ass.

— Jerry    Saturday 22 March 2008, 21:38    #

This is very good! Give yourself a pat on the back! ;)
P.S when is the next chapter coming? it been almost a year since i last read this (Yes i read your stories twice)

— Victoria    Friday 29 August 2008, 2:51    #

Sorry to all who have been following this story. Work has consumed every waking minute both physically and emotionally for over 12 months and has given me nothing but grief and heartache in return. So I start a new job on 15 September that pays more, involves less time and is something I enjoy doing. The upshot is that I hope to have my half completed chapter finished before the end of November. Thank you again all for your patience but I am determined to finish this story and Misto keeps rattling his armour at me menacingly in my dreams!!

— KC    Monday 1 September 2008, 11:25    #

Congratulations on your new job! It is so important to also have time for yourself, not just for work – great to hear you’re finding a better balance. Best of luck!

iris    Thursday 4 September 2008, 11:18    #

Well done on getting a much better job. I know I’m being selfish but I love this story so much please continue it as soon as possible. I enjoy reading and experiencing the way your characters continue to evolve…keep up the good work.

— Annette    Monday 17 November 2008, 20:05    #

Hi. I just found this story and really enjoyed it. I love your characterization of Faramir and the elves. I can’t wait to see where you go with this story next. Please update again soon.

— ana    Wednesday 29 April 2009, 6:31    #

Hi KC!

I just discovered your story, and was well impressed by it. I see you’ve not updated for a while, and I’m guessing RL got in the way? I hope all is well and that you keep writing as you’ve got a great talent. Thanks for all your effort!

— Aqua    Tuesday 1 September 2009, 7:29    #

Hey, as I said before but this time it different, I think you should consider publishing this but I’ll think it’ll be a short book but still! and yep this is much be…fourth time I read this? It just too enjoyable :D

— Victoria    Tuesday 20 October 2009, 0:01    #

Please do finish this story.
Even though I don’t second your “love” for spanking, you write so well that I need to know how it ends.
Don’t keep us in the dark.
PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!

— lille mermeid    Sunday 31 January 2010, 19:15    #

Hi all,
Sorry to have gone MIA for so long but 2009 was a hard year. Worked like a dog on a successful project and won an organisational award.

Went to another project job, worked like a dog and won another organisational award.

Went into a non-project job in the same organisation and four days later retrenchment packages were offered to all. Much to the chagrin of the bosses, mine was too good to refuse and has set me up for life.

Left work and looked forward to writing again. Unfortunately I had to look after an ailing mother for three months. Mother is now better. Looked forward to writing again.

Unfortunately, bosses begged me to come back as a contractor. In a moment of weakness said yes. Still working but am starting to write again only to face a bit of writer’s block.

Whew!! What a year!!

— KC    Monday 1 February 2010, 22:06    #

Hi KC,

I have very much enjoyed your series of stories beginning with Grief and currently ending in War of Wizards. They are a very fun read, you really give a charming personality to characters I’ve always loved and wanted to know more about, such as Faramir, and his uncle Imrahil’s family.

No pressure whatsoever, but if you do write more in the future, I will be happy to read. In particular, I wonder whether Saruman realizes how thoroughly he may be outclassed in cunning by the fox cubs and their families and friends. I also wonder whether Eowyn has decided to accompany the soldiers from Rohan in the War of the Wizards, since Eomer elected to leave her in Rohan, and it seems the type of thing she might do again, this time for the purpose of watching Farmir’s back. I’m also interested in seeing the first meeting between Eomer and Imrahil’s daughter, and Faramir’s elven family and Eowyn. If I can be of any assistance in terms of proofreading or hashing out ideas, please feel free to drop me a line.

Best of luck with everything,

Susana R.

— Susana R    Sunday 23 May 2010, 7:46    #

I am doing the happy dance!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I can’t wait to read the rest of this wonderful story, full of humour and adventure.

You were one of the writers who made me want to write Faramir Fan Fiction.

— Lille Mermeid    Thursday 15 July 2010, 16:48    #

KC, It’s wonderful to see you writing again! Thank you so much for sharing your fantastic stories with us, and I hope life is treating you better now. This is one of my favourite stories, and an update is a lovely excuse for a re-read! Thank you again. Wendy

— Wendy    Thursday 15 July 2010, 20:34    #

You’re back!! How wonderful! I enjoy your stories so much and to see an update to War of Wizards has made my day! Thank you so very, very much!!

— Libraryblue    Thursday 15 July 2010, 20:51    #

Happy to see You back and for that reason I re-read whole story once again. Thank You!

— Cicely    Sunday 18 July 2010, 5:43    #

Lovely to see you writing again! The personalities and interactions of your characters are as delightful as ever. Still brings a smile to my face!

— trixie    Thursday 22 July 2010, 5:40    #

Hello,

I have just finished reading the entire series you wrote. I have enjoyed so much that I can’t help but ask you to continue. Everything, from the idea of younger ones being spanked, to larger roles of some characters, to the amused elderly Elves, to fox cubs… I don’t know, just everything seems so right. This series has had me both on the edge of tears and chuckling throughout the reading. I enjoy Faramir fictions and the way you’re writing this one, intertwining the memories and the presence, going into the depths with each character yet not going out of them (OOC) is amazing. I would very much like to see this to be finished some day.

Thank you very much for the delightful experience of being able to read the brilliantly written story.
And I do apologize, for this comment doesn’t make up even for the half of it, but there is so much I can’t quite put into words at the moment. Am still stunned at how you managed to do it and how good it came out.

Best regards,
A.

— Aneyrin    Thursday 23 December 2010, 21:10    #

OMG! I love these stories so much they have had me laughing and crying at Faramirs exploits! I cant wait to read the rest :) x

— key    Friday 25 February 2011, 19:50    #

Wow, Your stories are wonderful.
I couldn’t stop reading them until the end. I almost cry when I saw that war of the wizards wasn’t finished. (ok, it was probably the nerves since I didn’t sleep in two nights that I spent reading. XD)
You’re a very good writer and these fics are just very interesting, and the plot is fun and intriguing at the same time.

Bye!!!!!

— Girlytiger    Thursday 21 April 2011, 22:32    #

I love this series i will admit i never thought about faramir being adopted by elves please please please update soon.

— Nikki    Monday 11 July 2011, 2:35    #

great story – please do continue.Can hardly wait for how it ends. thanks for writing.

— joe    Monday 2 January 2012, 10:43    #

Greeting, dear KC!

I just re-read War of Wizards and enjoyed it as much as I did the frist time through. I still had fits of laughter and giggles throughout the reading and I swear someone was peeling onion at certain times when I was reading.

This site hasn’t heard from you in a while, but I do hope you’re well and will once continue writing and posting this wonderful story you created.

Thank you for sharing it with us and good luck with whatever it is you’re doing in your life currently,
A.

— Aneyrin    Tuesday 17 July 2012, 22:01    #

Hi KC,

I hope all is well in your life and you still have the time to write.

Just wanted to thank you for the great story and for the sharing of it .
It is amazing how you manage to create such a wanderfull time line and I just love the characters and the way they interact .

Looking forward to the next chapters and a happy end of the story .

Many thanks for your work.
Good luck in life and happiness .
BlackSwan

— BlackSwan    Thursday 14 February 2013, 6:20    #

Hi KC, just wanted to say I really enjoyed this story. Thank you so much for sharing it. I know it’s been a long time since you updated it and hope everything is alright in your life. I hold out hope that this fantastic story will eventually be finished. Again thanks for the story and good luck in your life.

— Anna    Thursday 5 June 2014, 20:41    #

Hi – thanks for a great read. I’m assuming this story has been abandoned – or is continued on a 3rd site? Can you advise?

— tiinaj1    Thursday 20 July 2017, 3:37    #

Are you going to update this anytime soon. I’m dying to figure out what happens! I love Love LOVE!!!! these stories please keep writing. ;)

— Alexa    Sunday 29 July 2018, 19:41    #

Very enjoyable and fulfilling read! Is this story still in the making, or has it been abandoned? I hope not the latter! So much want to find out how it ends!

— Treedweller    Saturday 19 January 2019, 10:48    #

Me again. I’ve just read the entire series up to here for the third time. It looks like this has been abandoned? Alas, so many of us are dying to find out what happens! Thank you for your work and for sharing it with us.

— Treedweller    Friday 14 June 2019, 13:27    #

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