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Exile (NC-17) Print

Written by Alcardilmë

19 February 2012 | 8769 words | Work in Progress

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Chapter Fourteen

“Is this some taunt? Some wizardry?” Faramir’s eyes blazed in fury. “Where is Boromir?” The tent was empty. A cot lay with covers disheveled.

Théodred stepped through and swore. “By Bema’s balls!” He strode back out the entrance shouting loudly. “I want him found. Now!”

The camp flew into chaos. Horses were mounted and riders set out, hooves thundering, dust billowing.

“Make haste to declare yourself, Rohir!” Faramir stepped in front of Théodred. “What have you done with Boromir, for I know he was here. And know you, I abhor riddles.”

“Faramir. Come with me.” Théodred put his hand on Faramir’s shoulder, but the boy shrugged it off. “To Boromir’s tent. For I swear on Bema’s name, Boromir was safe within just a moment before you entered.”

Faramir walked in front of the Rohir and ducked, entering the tent and turning quickly to guard his back.

“Be still and listen to me, Faramir. There is more here than I understand. Yet,” Faramir felt Théodred’s eyes bore into him, “you know of what I speak.”

“I know nothing. I know Boromir was here and you have spirited him off.”

“If so, why would I give him his sword?”

“I… I do not understand.”

“His scabbard and sword, and his dagger, are gone. We retrieved them from the Druin’s cave and brought them here. Would I let a prisoner take his sword? Would I arm an opponent? Faramir. What dread secret do you hold in your heart.”

Faramir turned. He could not look the Horse Lord in the face. “Nothing,” he whispered. “I know nothing.”

Théodred spoke into his ear. “I begin to surmise some of your reticence.”

Faramir felt the Rohir behind him, breathing so close the hairs on his neck stood. He kept his tongue as his body reacted in unseemly ways.

“I have known Boromir for some time, Farramir. I know his… tendencies. I have been with him.”

The low voice washed over his body. Faramir had all he could do to stand. “Fatigue. I am fatigued and would rest.”

“You are more than fatigued, little brother of my friend. My lover.”

“Stop. I will not listen.” Faramir made to turn but strong arms encased him. He struggled. “Leave me be.”

“When I have delved into the reason for my lover’s fear of you.”

“Boromir does not fear me. I am his brother and his most loyal friend.”

“Loyal. Until he asks for more than you are willing to give?”

“He asks nothing.”

“He runs from you. Tell me why, Faramir. What did you do?”

“I did nothing.” Faramir’s shoulders shook with sobs.

“Let me show you what you might have done.”

Faramir felt his hair being moved aside and a gentle kiss touch the back of his neck. His cock twitched. “Leave me.” He flinched at how miserable and whiny he sounded.

“In a moment. Or two.” Théodred ran his hands down Faramir’s sides.

The boy shivered and tried to pull away.

Théodred clasped him hard again. He pinched Faramir’s buds through his tunic. “You wear too much.”

“Leave… leave me. I do not want this.”

“Perhaps this will help you understand your brother better. Would you not want to understand Boromir?”

“I understand him.” Faramir shivered when a hand touched his groin.

“I think you want to understand him. I think you want to have him touch you as I do. I know he would touch you this way, if he felt you would accept him.”

“Accept him.” Faramir’s anger flared and the heat in his groin disappeared. He wrenched himself free. “None accept him as I do. He misunderstands. He gives me not the benefit of the doubt. He…” His words were stopped as Théodred grabbed the back of his head and pulled him close, thrusting his tongue between Faramir’s lips and groaning.

“Oh, sweet boy. Boromir told me you were exquisite.”

To be Continued

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19 Comment(s)

Very interesting beginning! Please, continue!

— Anastassiya    Monday 12 July 2010, 6:13    #

Chapters 2, 3 & 4 are already in the can…. Glad you found this interesting.

Alcardilmë    Tuesday 13 July 2010, 3:52    #

It is so fascinating to see angst explored from inside Boromir’s head. Few authors tap into the elder brother’s thoughts and feelings.

— trixie    Thursday 22 July 2010, 5:54    #

Many thanks! I do so love getting into my character’s heads! giggles Rather naughty, don’t you think!

Alcardilmë    Sunday 25 July 2010, 4:11    #

Greedily waiting for chapter 3 and on! Great beginning, love the angsty Boromir. So far you do not betray what Faramir might be thinking on a certain matter, so it’s all doubly intriguing.

December    Thursday 29 July 2010, 18:55    #

Bless you! You know I am such a fan of yours. I cannot believe your tale, ‘Oxygen’ – just blew me away – incredible writing. I am soooo pleased to think something of mine makes you greedy! Again, bless you!

Alcardilmë    Friday 30 July 2010, 5:26    #

Yey, first to comment on chapter 3! I felt so sorry for Boromir reading this chapter, what with his misery and all, and I so wished something nice would happen to him – and then there’s this ending… Well, what can I say: again, I’m waiting for more, naively hoping something nice would happen to him in the next chapter…

December    Thursday 5 August 2010, 9:52    #

We can only hope that something nice will happen to Boromir and Faramir… both suffering in their own ways. Boromir has been fighting something he cannot see; perhaps this new enemy will clear his head! Thanks ever so much for commenting. Most appreciated.

Alcardilmë    Thursday 5 August 2010, 22:12    #

Great, great, another chapter!
I wonder if Boromir had given it any thought how insane with worry everybody would be made by his disappearance… And I really-really wonder what Faramir would think – and do – if he were to know the truth… And, naturally, I wonder what is going on with the unfortunate heir and his new er… acquaintances.
Glad to have had this update, and of course much looking forward to the next one!

December    Thursday 26 August 2010, 13:38    #

Thanks, December, for continuing to comment… and read… Poor Boromir – honor is of the utmost importance. And Faramir’s honor is to be guarded with his life… which he has now, in his mind, failed miserably.

Alcardilmë    Sunday 3 October 2010, 7:16    #

Oh, poor baby Boromir! I just discovered this story and it is FANTASTIC! :)

— cecilia    Sunday 3 October 2010, 8:57    #

Many thanks, cecilia, I’m enjoying writing this.

Alcardilmë    Monday 18 October 2010, 23:20    #

Alrighty, finally worked up the courage to read what happens to Boromir…
Er… I probably got one of those shock-resistant minds: it just refuses to fully take in everything that’s happened to him. The magnitude of it just won’t sink in… There’s still this thought that if now he’s treated with care, he’ll come to be just as before – which is obviously not how these things work… I mean, a single dose of what he’d been through can easily leave one messed up for life – and he’d been there, what, weeks? And so many people, too… He must be quite destroyed, although I can see how seeing it all as a deserved punishment would in part help him come to acceptance. And I’m wondering, too, what about… well, the physical side of the healing. The treatment he’d been subjected to is bound to have left his body in a rather irreparable state – what is he going to do about that…? One would think he’s already more than paid his due for putting Faramir’s honour in danger – I wonder if that’s occured to Boromir, too…

December    Tuesday 18 January 2011, 17:16    #

Gonna be a long haul on the healing end – but don’t you think Theodred might have what it takes to help our dear man? Wait till Faramir finally finds him, too.

alcardilme    Saturday 22 January 2011, 5:26    #

Yea, Theodred’s a good character: we know hardly anything about him, so really, one can make him into pretty much anybody. And anyway, that talk about healing is purely theoretical for now: I mean, I don’t even know whether you actually do plan for Boromir to get healed ;) What with Boromir being the tragic hero he is, it could go in any direction for all I know :) I just hope that, you know, he won’t have to go through the “axe” thing again…

December    Saturday 22 January 2011, 9:32    #

Hey, darling! How’s it going with this one?
After what poor B’s been through, I’d really love to see him on a happier path :)

December    Monday 11 July 2011, 7:53    #

Woohoohoo, call me cynical, but I’m getting the feeling Theodred’s going to make Boromir’s already somewhat miserable life only the more difficult XD How can Boromir handle so much love now, especially from someone who isn’t Faramir? Because, cleanse you inside out – that means what I think it does, does it…?

December    Saturday 19 November 2011, 9:14    #

More! More!
Also, me enjoy the dialogue :)

December    Wednesday 30 November 2011, 0:47    #

My dear, are you well? And… will there be more…?

I have commented on this story before, but now I am more on the edge than ever. I’ll be honest, I had expected a more straightforward development of events at the point where Faramir tracks Boromir down, something about healing, etc.
What I have found instead is more complicated, and more interesting to me, and also what I find to be much more real-life. Many shadowy issues they have, both the brothers. And Theodred… he knows Boromir well. Maybe too well for Boromir’s comfort. I don’t feel Boromir would be thankful to him for speaking to Faramir thus and treating Faramir thus. Especially since this chapter reveals to us that Faramir is still very young. He is spirited, and passionate, and very devoted, but… maybe he’s a bit too young to deal with all of this?
And what is his standing on Boromir’s feelings for him? So far we have heard nothing on this, except that what he has learned has not stayed him from searching for Boromir, and apparently has not cut off his love for his brother. But… I don’t know, I don’t like Theodred doing what he does, even if eventually it will lead to the brothers’ benefit. Boromir has suffered much, and Faramir has endured much worry, and no doubt he will be greatly pained when he learns what depths of suffering Boromir had been subjected to. I guess we could say Faramir too will sustain a mental trauma – and amid all of this, Theodred seducing/taunting him? Come on, Theodred, is this really what the young man needs at the moment?

December    Sunday 29 July 2012, 7:34    #

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